yay!!! I finally finished it!!! I'm soooo happy! I have been doing this for ages!
I know the background SUCKS, but hey, I wanted to finish!!!
Anyways... in this picture I think I only like the hair and their tops... thats all...
These are someones OC's (that someone being on gaia ^^)
Tell me what I can improve on please!!!
Ok, sorry for being so strange! I am in 'jango' mode. utterly mad but harmless.
Oh yeah, did I mention, LIFE SUCKS!!!! Its a barstard and I dont like it!!!
Great colouring, especially on the hair!! ^^ Tell me, do you use a special brush for it? I like the effect that you gave the bg, too!! It makes you concentrate more on the charas! It also seems far away!
I agree with the hair looks really good. the angled composition really gives it a unique look apart from your other pieces thus far. Their expressions look painful, hurt, sad, and, well, lost. The blurred background really does allow the viewer to focus on the two girls. Great job there
Wow, your drawing and coloring of clothes have really improved over your last couple pieces. The jeans look really nice, especially the tears in them. And the top on the dark haired girl looks very well done, it contours around her and flares out just as it would naturally.
They are structured and proportioned nicely, especially for their age group, but if you want any criticism, I would say that the anatomy could use a little work in terms of definition. Particularly, where the shoulders transition into the upper arm, and the pit of the elbow. Another couple of places that really bring out their feminine features would be the curve between the armpit and breast, and a little definition on her tummy and navel (I can see that some was done, but it gets lost with the rest of the skin). I think that would really shape them out.
This is really good. It's quite an improvement.
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Tough angle to work with but I think you pulled it off well. Both of the girl's hair look great and I like the rippling effect of the one on the left's shirt. Nice work!
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Shh! Don't bother speaking... I'm just going to edit your dialogue out later.
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I know, I needed refrence XD
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Wow, your drawing and coloring of clothes have really improved over your last couple pieces. The jeans look really nice, especially the tears in them. And the top on the dark haired girl looks very well done, it contours around her and flares out just as it would naturally.
They are structured and proportioned nicely, especially for their age group, but if you want any criticism, I would say that the anatomy could use a little work in terms of definition. Particularly, where the shoulders transition into the upper arm, and the pit of the elbow. Another couple of places that really bring out their feminine features would be the curve between the armpit and breast, and a little definition on her tummy and navel (I can see that some was done, but it gets lost with the rest of the skin). I think that would really shape them out.
This is really good. It's quite an improvement.
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I don't have a girlfriend... I just know someone who would get REALLY mad if they heard me say that.
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Shh! Don't bother speaking... I'm just going to edit your dialogue out later.
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it does!
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And I love their outfits... ^_^ Especially the pants
and the girl on the left's eyes
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